K a w a i i K i s s
I think the Fall of Areithos is the best story I've ever read! It's so unique, complex, and descriptive. Although it wasn't very long (so far there's only up to chapter one), it seemed like I was reading forever! I felt like I was there with Eve and Isaac, and that I could reach out and touch Eve's long curls, and brush away Isaac's golden bangs away from his eyes. Keep up the absolutely FABULOUS work!!
V i o l l e t S k y
Wow! Great word choice! Very effective writing.. I don't have any suggestions.. The chemistry between Isaac and Eve is very sweet.. Can't wait for the next part..
S e r a p h 5 5 0
You're right. There aren't quite that many stories like yours. And I thank you for bringing this here, because...::jumps up and down:: It's a new reading style for us to experience. Wow. I love your description. You make images in my mind, and I can clearly see what happens. Great trait to have in writing.
D o l p h i n X e
Wow! Love it! This story is very unusual, unusual is good:)
R o x y L u c k y
hm..love it love it love it is all I can say.
A n g l R W t h U s
I just wanted to say that your story is excellent. It is one of the best stories I have read in a looooonnnnggg time. You're a great writer and the story is... *needs describing word*... captivating and enchanting. Good job!
V i o l l e t S k y
Look what you've done! I get bored and decide to sneak a peak at the new stories (even though I said I wasn't coming back to the boards) and now I have to read this amazing story! UGH! You're an evil, evil person.. Just kidding, of course.. This is an amazing story. Great detail.. And thank goodness.. it's original! Can't wait for the next part..
M i l k y W o r m
I'm very impressed with your story. I really, really like it so far. It's so different and refreshing, and I think it's going to be truly wonderful!!!
C l i l C
i LOVE your descriptiveness....
D o l p h i n X e
Yay! I loooooooove this story! Very unique, very descriptive.
K v d c v d
I think The Fall of Areithos is awesomely bombin'! I think the story is suspenseful and totally thought-provoking. IT'S ROCKIN'!
